Slirun's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Sonic and the Chilidog Trap]

Nice work brother. If you step up your animation skills, it would be better.

[Magikarp Smash Bros ?! (Cartoon Parody Animation) (English subtitles on youtube)]

Alright your video is fine to watch. I just feel like your animation is rush and some what poor. Also at the last 30 seconds , I hear nonsense that is written full of nonsense. Have it on youtube fine , but in Newgrounds just cut it out and put it away. Your cartoon did gave me a little laugh though or have a collaboration with friends to make more funny content.

JinNeara responds:

Thanks a lot for your advice. My futur cartoon would be better

[Smash Bros Collab]

Is Long , as hell but I love it.

[Super Mario Bros. Z (Episode 1)]

Oh my, to see Super Mario Bros Z eps 1 compare to Super Mario Bros Z eps 1 remake. Oh my Earth, it's remarkable to see how much you improve. Keep up the good work Alvin, I can't wait to see Super Mario Bros Z eps 2 remake or eps 9.

[Pi's Cuteness Can Kill]

Lol this is funny and plus this animation should be on vines. Also I purposely gave 4 stars because you need to improve your animation just a little bit ;). Then it would be worth 5 stars.

[My Sonic Channel Intro]

NIce speech about your future dream animation , and also I have the similar thoughts like yours. Also if u want to acheive it , you must work on it ok ;).

[PokeDragonMonBallZ]

It's funny but the animation could have been longer :/ .

[Crystal Story II Intro]

oh boy it's epic can't wait for it to come !!!!

[Goku Vs PPG]

The fight was ok but there is lots of things that u got to improve and make it sense. Let me explain

1. why didn't the power puff girls didn't get the chance to smack goku not even one
2. come on show goku super sain 2 , 3 and 4 .
3. the sprite animation needs !!!!! some improvement
4. Sorry if my review gives u some hush full ness but the truth is the the truth
-Henrun

[Episode 1]

It's not great. it is bad :( like really :'(