Slirun's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Magikarp Smash Bros ?! (Cartoon Parody Animation) (English subtitles on youtube)]

Alright your video is fine to watch. I just feel like your animation is rush and some what poor. Also at the last 30 seconds , I hear nonsense that is written full of nonsense. Have it on youtube fine , but in Newgrounds just cut it out and put it away. Your cartoon did gave me a little laugh though or have a collaboration with friends to make more funny content.

JinNeara responds:

Thanks a lot for your advice. My futur cartoon would be better

[Falcon Charm]

This is very funny now all u need to do to earn 5 stars is to improve your animation ok ;).

OttoBullrigger responds:

Glad you liked it. Thanks for the review.

[Spiderdub: Sarcophagus]

this is funny :P XD!!!!